Last Wednesday,
Justified concluded its fifth season
on FX. The show stars Timothy Olyphant as Raylan Givens, a deputy U.S. Marshal,
and follows his life in his home of Harlan County, Kentucky. Raylan shares a
bond with local self-styled “outlaw” Boyd Crowder (Walton Goggins). Boyd and
Raylan live on opposite sides of the law, but have a long personal history—they
dug coal together, as one of them usually reminds the audience. As in past
seasons, Justified introduced a new
villain to serve as foil for both Raylan and Boyd. The show introduced Darryl
Crowe Jr. (Michael Rappaport) and his family from Florida, cousins of Harlan
criminal, comic foil, and universal sad sack Dewey Crowe. Ultimately, the fifth
season of Justified represented one
of the show’s weaker story arcs, muddled by too many plot lines, and the
relegation of Raylan to a side character for much of the season.
Justified expended much of its narrative
energy on Boyd’s attempts to become a large scale heroin dealer. The arc began promisingly
with a darkly hilarious trip to Detroit as Boyd and partner Wynn Duffy
attempted to import heroin through Canada. Murdering Detroit mobsters and their
dismembered manikins waylaid Boyd’s plans—the mobsters explained the manikins
thusly, “That was last week.” Once Boyd turned his focus to Mexico the plotline
unraveled. The involvement of Boyd’s cousin and rival Johnny, squabbles with
the Crowes, and tensions with Memphis based drug dealers devoured the middle
part of the season, while offering little payoff. As Boyd’s heroin schemes
faced delay after delay and disaster after disaster, even Boyd became exacerbated
by the whole exercise. In a confrontation with Darryl Crowe, some Memphis
hitmen, and his partners, Boyd expressed the audience’s frustration when he
wished that they would all just shoot each other and figure out the heroin
later.
The
imprisonment of Boyd’s fiancé Ava also dragged down the pace of the season. Her
storyline grew increasingly separate from the rest of show as the season went
on. The series used increasingly bizarre means to keep Ava in jail, culminating
in having a county jail guard shiv himself to get Ava sent to state prison. Justified showrunner Graham Yost has
explained in recent interviews that the writers wanted the plotline to force
Ava to rely on herself and compel her (at the end of the season) to turn
against Boyd. Watching Ava’s storyline over the course of the season, the show’s
writers mapped out storyline accordingly instead of letting it evolve
organically. What could have been an interesting idea about the power of prison
to strip away Ava’s humanity, instead dragged on too long and had little
relation to rest of the action in Justified.
Raylan
spent most of the season as a secondary character with Ava and Boyd carrying
the longer narrative arcs. Raylan, instead, became enmeshed in standalone
episodes. Justified has always
balanced episodes of the week with longer story arcs, but the show put Raylan
largely on the sidelines for much of the season. The best seasons of Justified—the 2nd and 4th—have
Raylan and Boyd working at parallel goals. The second season featured a
confrontation with Mags Bennett and her family and the fourth attempted to
unravel the identity of a mob-connected man named Drew Thompson. With the two
main characters working at totally different purposes, Justified suffered from a lack of narrative focus. Even Raylan’s
dealings with the Crowes, the ostensible villains of the season, lacked the dramatic
tension present in other seasons. The show talked much more about the villainy
of the Crowes rather than actually demonstrating it. In the season finale,
Darryl Crowe Jr. slipped past a tailing Marshal by running a red light. The
writers should have slipped Darryl some of Mags Bennett’s “apple pie” moonshine
much earlier in the season.
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